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« This one night in Bangkok »
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le vendredi 03 juillet 2015, à 13:15. Posté
par Claude Hermann
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I was whispering…
Send her a little mail…
To tell you…
How you have changed my live…
How a great person you are…
That you’ll always…
Have a very special place…
In my heart…
I don't know why we met...
But I’ll always remember…
The first time…
That I saw you at this hospital…
The way you smile to me…
The way you look at me...
I though first…
Maybe…
She's an angel...
And a beautiful one…
I'm in heaven...
It was so magic…
And I was so shine…
After…
When i left you at the hospital…
I feld so empty…
Because…
In one look…
I had simply given you my heart…
And I though…
Ever and never…
See you again…
And to feel this again…
And then…
I saw you in that pub...
I was drunk…
But I still remember every details...
The music they played…
Your eyes...
The way you look…
The way you move ...
Your perfume...
My best friend…
Trying to seduce you...
Every beat of my heart...
The reflects of the light on your skin...
The dances we danced together ...
it's was more than a dream that came true ...
This night…
You disappear again...
And i couldn't slept…
Because for me…
The music didn't stop in my heart…
And I kept dancing…
With you in my head all night long...
A few nights later...
I cross your way again...
Your eyes captured my heart...
And your lips become my cross ...
I don't know why...
You was drunk...
Maeby… did you feel pity for me?
But even now…
When live has been rough with me...
Or when sometimes i feel blues...
I close my eyes...
And in my heart…
I go back...
Back in time…
Back in your arms …
The only place on earth…
Where I felt pure happiness
I send you a lot of hugs ...
And I wish you…
To feel for someone…
What I felt for you…
This one night in BKK
Koko 7/2015
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Ivy le mercredi 08 juillet 2015, à 07:52 Il y toujours une 'première fois' qui reste 'unforgettable' !
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Ivy le mercredi 08 juillet 2015, à 07:56 Une belle lettre qui mérite quelques petites corrections. Je peux les faire sur votre Forum ... si vous le souhaitez ?
Yours friendly |
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koko le mercredi 08 juillet 2015, à 12:08 Hello ivy tes corrections sont welcome thx |
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Ivy le mercredi 08 juillet 2015, à 15:54 Hello,
Désolée, rien à faire, impossible d'écrire sur le Forum ! Je poste donc ici; tu supprimeras après ! J'espère n'avoir rien oublié..mais pas sûre de ce que tu voulais exprimer par ' I was so shine' ! ( gleaming' peut-être ?)
I was whispering…
Send her a little mail…
To tell you…
How you change my live… (how you've changed; ou, how you changed)
How great A person you are… ou WHAT A GREAT PERSON...
That you’ll always…
Have a very special place…
In my heart…
I don't know why we met...
But I’ll always remember…
The first time…
That I saw you at this hospital…
The way you smileD AT me…
The way you lookED at me...
I thoughT first…
Maybe…
She's an angel...
And a beautiful one…
I'm in heaven...
It was so magicAL…
And I was ( so shine …?? )
After…
When I left you at the hospital…
I felT so empty…
Because…
In one look…
I had simply given you my heart…
And I thoughT…
Ever and never…
See you again…
And to feel this again…
And then…
I saw you in that pub...
I was drunk…
But I still remember every detail (s)... pas de 's'
The music they played…
Your eyes...
The way you lookED…
The way you moveED ...
Your perfume...
My best friend…
Trying to seduce you...
Every beat of my heart...
The reflects of the light on your skin...
The dances we danced together ...
it's was more than a dream that came true ...
This night…( THATnight..)
You disappearED again...
And I couldn't sleEEP…
Because for me…
The music didn't stop in my heart…
And I kept dancing…
With you in my head all night long...
A few nights later...
I cross(ED) your (way) PATH ,again...
Your eyes captured my heart...
And your lips becAme my cross ...
I don't know why...
You wERE drunk...
MaybE… did you feel pity for me?
But even now…
When liFE has been rough with me...
Or when sometimes I feel blue (s)...
I close my eyes...
And in my heart…
I go back...
Back in time…
Back in your arms …
The only place on earth…
Where I felt pure happiness
I send you a lot of hugs ...
And I wish you…
To feel for someone…
What I felt for you…
This one night in BKK
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Ivy le mercredi 08 juillet 2015, à 15:57 Ps: Corrections en lettres majuscules ! |
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